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zoloft by ~sans-soleil:iconsans-soleil:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Open


there is this beautiful poem
called Zoloft.
every time i read it,
all my poems dissappear.
©2003-2009 ~sans-soleil
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Submitted: November 11, 2003
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~paranoidgirl:iconparanoidgirl: Nov 12, 2003, 10:34:53 AM
ohmygod i really didn't expect this. !!! love !!! wow, i. yeah. i wish you hadn't left an artist comment, though...it kind of took away from the poem, which does a great job of speaking for itself.

also, i think there really should be a period after the second line.
~sans-soleil:iconsans-soleil: Nov 12, 2003, 6:09:40 PM
the artist comment was because the drug reference was a little obscure... i didnt think most people would get the point of the poem, so i made it a blight more pedantic. (and i think i am right) :)

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je pense donc je suis
~paranoidgirl:iconparanoidgirl: Nov 12, 2003, 6:12:29 PM
i don't think it's obscure. it's been pretty mainstream for at least a couple of years now. but the point was that i like the poem :p
~EmbracingAmnesia:iconEmbracingAmnesia: Mar 30, 2004, 12:49:09 PM
Wow, I love this.. Very 'to the point', and obscure enough to make it rewarding to fully grasp. +fav, easily. :)
~sans-soleil:iconsans-soleil: Mar 30, 2004, 8:22:29 PM
much thanks for the reciprocation.
when you find another poet that shares your style, it is joy beyond to read their works as a reflection of your own.
i hope you read all of my poems. :)
i will of yours

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je pense donc je suis
~groovus:icongroovus: Apr 12, 2004, 5:40:10 AM
I like how just a few lines create this, these unexplainable disappearance acts. My only nit-pick would be that to me poetry would do better than poems, in the last line.

Good skill nonetheless.

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:bulletblue::bulletblue: Suture membrane or tissue issuer :bulletblue::bulletblue:

I'm jus' here and now
~pennylanechic:iconpennylanechic: Mar 6, 2005, 7:14:35 AM
wow very nice- the lines are incredibly striking... powerful and original

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"The greatest dream of all, no make that the greatest hope of all, is to constantly reawaken to life."
- Peruvian Proverb
~sisterjanet:iconsisterjanet: Apr 30, 2005, 6:59:46 PM
I came back to reread this, as I do with things I put in favorites from time to time, and noticed I hadn't ever commented on it. Someone I love needs Zoloft to be ok. This poem is like a well-placed arrow, but the words are beautiful. The brevity adds to the quality. It hurts in an interesting new way, but I like the poem quite well.
~sans-soleil:iconsans-soleil: May 1, 2005, 10:15:02 PM
thank you for the observations. it makes me glad to know people can understand my feeble attempts

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